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Where To study—Go Abroad or Stay in China Various people may hold absolutely opposite views on whether students should study in China or abroad. Some people insist that ambitious students should study in China because many returned overseas graduates only found their knowledge not available in China. Viewing the same matter from another angle, others may think students studied abroad are more likely to succeed.
Those with the former idea may indicate graduates from civil universities are more familiar with the situation of China. People holding the latter idea base their theory primarily on the fact overseas graduates have a broader view and more open mind. Over the raging dispute regarding study abroad versus study in China, some people oppose studying abroad because they think most overseas graduated have difficulties in adapting to situations back in China. One objection is civil graduates seldom have new ideas to cope with China’s affairs.
As for me, I prefer to study abroad. It goes without saying that comparing with the education in developed countries our education is still backward. Further more, overseas students may have conditions to keep an eye over the changes in China when they study abroad. Finally, the truth is that overseas graduates are preferred by more enterprises in China. All these lead to a conclusion that students have more chances to succeed if they have studied abroad
解析:
这是一篇对比选择型作文。第一段引入主题,陈述两种对立的观点;第二段可以采用两种写法,一种写法是论述完一种观点的所有优缺点后再论述另一种,另一种写法是把二者放在一起逐条进行对比,这篇作文采取后者表达效果可能会更好;第三段表明作者的观点。注意写作时可以使用一些对比选择性的词语,如:opposite views,some people...others...,the former/latter idea,oppose,object等。
【闪光词汇】
base...on...使建立在…基础上
raging adj. 猛烈的
versus prep.(表示两队或双方)对
It goes without saying that...不用说;不待说